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Vault as in atmosphere and sky

Vault Or Horizon

Vault
tangerine entranced
dazzle daze delight
visionary bard inspired by
vista

Horizon
crimson  red
dream paint sketch
brushstroke maestro’s gift from 
heaven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 4:35 AM
Howard, you had a great idea and ran with it. Very creative and descriptive while using some nice alliterations. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Thank you so very much, Sara, for your thorough detailed report into this post. I cherish each complement. Howard
Onclaud Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:37 AM
such vivid alchemy the sky can cast...lovely work!
Kerr Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 3:15 AM
I’m honoured by your constructive review and flattering words. Thank you so much Howard
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