Laura Breidenthal Poet Haiku

Vast Reflection

light year daze
objects burst in seams and blaze
starry blinks

farther still
burning in a fiery haze
planets turn

vast in sight
dark and bright in part and whole
earth reflects 

5/4/13

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Justin Bordner June 2, 2013 at 2:51 PM This write is a beautiful language/concept puzzle Laura - cosmological metamorphasis - J.A.B. %

Duke Beaufort May 18, 2013 at 5:31 PM Hey, nice that you think the universe is so big. It's such a pleasure to see that you consider these things so gracefully.

Poet Destroyer A May 18, 2013 at 1:59 PM Hello Laura, now that's a refection. I like the starry twinkling image... nice crafted haiku... Linda