Variable World

Not only
wavering ship
amidst sea

but also
steady moon
smirking above
budges throughout

Picture 1

For the contest Picture this 2 by Joseph May

July 6 2021
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Andresen Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 12:45 PM
- Great written ... congratulations on your winning poems, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Congrats on your win Supraja, Very nicely penned
Alex Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 7:35 PM
budges throughout Beautiful. Congratulations!
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 1:53 PM
This is a great image in poetry. Beautiful! Good luck in the contest, it is a wonderful poem. ~BJ
Pandit Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 1:02 PM
You described the image given beautifully, Supraja.
Kannan Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Hello, my dearest, Supraja. I visited to comment but without the photos, I am in the dark, however, I am certain you have done good work, as always. Hugs xxx Good luck!
Kannan Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Thank you for stopping by... I am no premium member and so I can't upload photos... Sorry...
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 8:38 AM
True. Everything is ever changing. Liked the way you described the image. All the best for contest. Put contest name and sponsor.
Kannan Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 8:56 AM
Oh! Sure... Thank you so much... I will update it ... Thanks again...
Buhagiar Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 7:36 AM
You captured that picture in the most wonderful way. Best for a win.
Kannan Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
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