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Vapor

vapor fog store
patrons exit; mismatched socks....
smiley faces

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Caren Krutsinger

January 15, 2022 at 11:27 PM

This is marvelous to read. I often wear mismatched socks to see the students' reactions to it. It gives me a lot of honesty.

Sara Kendrick

January 16, 2022 at 3:32 AM

Caren, Thanks for the nice review of my work. There used to be a woman in my husband's Sunday school class who would come to church with two different kinds of shoes. I guess she was still sleepy when she got out of bed and threw some clothes on to get to SS. She would laugh about it and keep on truckn'. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

November 25, 2021 at 8:32 PM

Am sure that they were happy, happy also. I have heard its not good at all for you and complications arise later in life.An excellent senyru I had a Smile with the mismatched socks well penned Sara my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

November 26, 2021 at 5:09 AM

Jennifer, Thank you ..I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Gershon Wolf

November 23, 2021 at 11:31 PM

'mismatched socks' -- pretty funny there, Sara. Smashed or stoned, what's the difference, anyway?! ~ Hilary Clinton

Sara Kendrick

November 24, 2021 at 3:43 AM

Gershon, I thought it was very funny that the woman had mismatched socks but she was vaping. Your comment added to my day's delight. Sara

Judy Ball

November 22, 2021 at 3:30 PM

Many of my co-workers are vaping now instead of smoking cigarettes. I heard though that vaping is worse for you than smoking cigarettes. A fine Senryu my friend. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

November 23, 2021 at 3:01 AM

Judy, I believe that vaping is just as bad or even worse than smoking. People do it thinking it is just fine and sometimes smoke even more. My grandson decided that it was a good idea to help him quit smoking. He quit because it cost so much plus it wasn't helping. Of course, a person has to really, really want to quit and make up their mind they will quit for it to be successful. Thanks for dropping by . Sara

Sotto Poet

November 21, 2021 at 1:03 PM

Sara, I viewed this with a smile on my face since I found it entertaining.

Sara Kendrick

November 22, 2021 at 3:47 AM

Lasaad, I am glad it entertained you. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

November 21, 2021 at 5:39 AM

Smiling as can be. Keep going. ~~

Sara Kendrick

November 21, 2021 at 8:31 AM

Victor, I guess when a person is addicted the smile comes when they have a fix for a little while. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

November 21, 2021 at 4:52 AM

Must be an age thing but do not know what to think about vaping. Like your senryu Sara...Delice

Sara Kendrick

November 21, 2021 at 8:27 AM

Delice, I don't think it is safe at all and it also endangers those around who inhale second hand smoke. I don't recommend it to anyone. At first, I thought it might be a solution for second hand smoke but it is not. Thanks for your visit. Sara

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