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Vanity At Sixty

high school reunion eyes gawk at my youthful look-- facelift unnoticed For Mick Talbot's Senryu Contest ~my aunt's anti-aging search 7/7/2018

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2018 7:56:00 AM

Ha ha, a clever piece. I guess it all depends on what has been lifted.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/8/2018 7:23:00 PM

Cute... good for you...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/8/2018 7:00:00 PM

Hilarious! I had to laugh at my own antics a few years ago, trying to be young at my 45th reunion!

Becca Teagan

Date: 7/8/2018 3:21:00 PM

lol Lucky that it isn't noticed. sometimes those facelifts don't turn out so well. :) Cute poem for the contest.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/8/2018 12:35:00 PM

Good write. All the best.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 7/8/2018 10:02:00 AM

Nice one; Good luck in the contest -JT

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/8/2018 7:46:00 AM

Excellent. Cleverly written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/7/2018 12:27:00 PM

Now that's good work Nette...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2018 12:13:00 PM

... a "scary" thought ... no knives or stapler in my face, Nette :) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/7/2018 11:29:00 AM

Astute ..clever...nicely delivered..best for a win, nette.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/7/2018 10:38:00 AM

Nette, Haha! But perhaps they started at your sexy ankles and haven't gotten to your perfect face yet ;)

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/7/2018 9:17:00 AM

Still looking good...probably even better...All the best Nette

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/7/2018 8:58:00 AM

At your witty best. Good luck Nette

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/7/2018 8:54:00 AM

LOL! Deceptively beautiful I’d say!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/7/2018 8:50:00 AM

Hee hee, I like it! My best to you in the contest! xomo :)