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"VANITY" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 17 JUNE 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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Vanity

Pretension, self-love

Dark siblings of vanity

Humility lost!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
        17 June 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 18, 2017 at 3:30 AM
I must confess I have been a little Vain in the past, but have realized over time that it is a superficial emotion, and it doesn't get in the way anymore Thanks for sharing your wise words dear Demetrios...Maria.
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June 18, 2017 at 5:57 PM
Maria it is always a delight to see you! Thank you for your generous comments!
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June 17, 2017 at 5:27 PM
Hello Demetrios, You've certainly captured the true metaphorical essence here of "Vanity" with this wondrous Haiku. Superb, as always, my dear friend!! Best Wishes, Gary (P.S. Thanks for your recent read of my couplet about the moon's faces!! --GB)
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June 18, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Mein freund Gary, I am so happy to see you again! Danke!
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June 17, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Beautifully metaphoric ...
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June 17, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Thank you my good friend, Probir!
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June 17, 2017 at 8:19 AM
- "First, myself ... then myself and always myself" ... without feelings and blind - Lost, yes ! - Great written, dear Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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June 17, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Unfortunately so dearest, Anne-Lise! Thank you for your kind comment! Hugs!
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