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Vanishing Point

two lines converge mirage meets ~ unrequited love on a one way street

absenceallusionlove hurtsmonoku

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Line Gauthier

October 26, 2022 at 7:20 AM

wonderful one-liner ~

David Kavanagh

October 26, 2022 at 11:27 AM

Thank you Line, I like this one myself, where do they come from, just popped into my head, cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta

June 9, 2022 at 7:10 AM

Wow! Congratulations on your win in the contest. A show stopper! :)Paulette

David Kavanagh

June 9, 2022 at 8:41 AM

Thank you Paulette, for your very kind comment, I’m delighted with the response this one got, and the placement, cheers David

Brandy Nicole

June 8, 2022 at 11:17 AM

Love can be a one way street to some, which is so sad. You have expressed this emotional with such depth and meaning. Congratulations David, on your placement in this contest. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

David Kavanagh

June 8, 2022 at 12:20 PM

Heya Brandy, really is so sad to see, when it’s all one way in a relationship, it can be so destructive for the love affected one, thank you for stopping by with congrats, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

June 8, 2022 at 8:26 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write and picture. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................

David Kavanagh

June 8, 2022 at 8:37 AM

Thank you Paula, it was a pretty late entry, so I’m extra delighted to pick up a placement, cheers David

Beryl Edmonds

June 8, 2022 at 5:42 AM

Lonely is love that’s unreturned. A moving Monoku David. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle

David Kavanagh

June 8, 2022 at 7:54 AM

Thank you so much Belle, much unrequited love, I read here on the soup every day hopefully true love is found eventually, but it’s certainly not guaranteed, cheers David

Christuraj Alex

June 7, 2022 at 8:45 PM

Highly potent monoku. Congratulations!

David Kavanagh

June 8, 2022 at 12:08 AM

Heya Chris, thank you again for stopping by my page, your presence is always welcome, cheers David

Janice Canerdy

June 7, 2022 at 6:31 PM

Very touching, David! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

David Kavanagh

June 8, 2022 at 12:07 AM

Thank you Janice, I’m absolutely delighted with the placement, so glad I entered the contest now, cheers David

Swetha Vangaveti

June 6, 2022 at 11:07 AM

Sad yet true. Some love stories end up driving on a one-way.

David Kavanagh

June 6, 2022 at 12:15 PM

Unfortunately they do Swetha, probably more so they are one way in unrequited situations, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

June 6, 2022 at 2:08 AM

Sadly that happens in life David, some things were just not meant to be. Tom

David Kavanagh

June 6, 2022 at 2:19 AM

Sure is Tom, especially in our teenage years when it’s difficult to understand the processes at play, this is perhaps an abstract view of the overall picture, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu

June 5, 2022 at 3:14 PM

Hello David Kavangh, yes sometimes love is a one way street. Cheers! Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu

June 5, 2022 at 3:40 PM

Hello David, yes life can be tough sometimes. Cheers! Darlene/

David Kavanagh

June 5, 2022 at 3:30 PM

Heya Darlene, unfortunately it can be especially when unrequited, life indeed can be tough at times, cheers David

Alexis Y.

June 5, 2022 at 1:08 PM

Wow! David, I'm done you are the monoku King!

David Kavanagh

June 5, 2022 at 1:19 PM

High praise from the queen Alexis, lol your way too kind, I was going to add a picture, but the right one proved elusive, a bit like my monoku, cheers David

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