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Vanishing Gifts

Vanishing Gifts The river flowing The wind blowing come back,keep doing The time crawling The life flying come back never,vanishing.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/17/2009 10:58:00 AM

What a message Chacko .. glad u liked my Christmas Poem from NJ... hope Carolyn, the contest person, sees it that way also... she did send me a comment about it yesterday as she is also from NJ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/2/2009 6:07:00 AM

Thank you for posting your splendid poetry that we all may read it Chacko. It was a very enjoyable read for me this morning. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/1/2009 2:47:00 PM

Just as the wind and river continue their motion, time does so as well. And although the river and wind exist in perpetuity, the end of an individual's lifetime is finite. Much said in six brief lines, Chacko! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/1/2009 2:44:00 PM

love the title! love the flow!... good work! Chacko!... jim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2009 1:43:00 PM

That river of life just keeps going on down to the ocean doesn't it. I like the form in which you presented the idea. Keep writing. Sara