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VANISHED VITALITY

VANISHED VITALITY
Vibrant villa then, uninhabited now stands squalid with locked rusted gate
9th November 2016 For One Liner Contest Sponsored by Rick Parise Theme- The Rusted Gate

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Date: 11/10/2016 8:47:00 PM
You excel at these short alliterative one liners. Great vocabulary!!
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Date: 11/9/2016 7:03:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in one line, Anu:) a 7:)
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 11/10/2016 11:32:00 AM
Dear Jo, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words:) glad you liked my one liner:) you are generous Jo:)//love, Anu:)
Date: 11/9/2016 6:31:00 AM
fabulous imagery and alliteration anu:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 11/10/2016 11:31:00 AM
Dear Jan, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words:) glad you liked my one liner:)//love, Anu:)
Date: 11/9/2016 6:23:00 AM
I can well picture your one-liner, Anu. It's time for new owners to bring it back to life! ~ Regards // paul
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 11/10/2016 11:30:00 AM
Dear Paul, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words, yeah...its time there is a new change! its a fiction anyways:)//love, Anu:)