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Vanished Vitality

VANISHED VITALITY
Vibrant villa then, uninhabited now stands squalid with locked rusted gate 9th November 2016 For One Liner Contest Sponsored by Rick Parise Theme- The Rusted Gate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/10/2016 8:47:00 PM
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You excel at these short alliterative one liners. Great vocabulary!!
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 11/9/2016 7:03:00 AM
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Beautiful imagery in one line, Anu:) a 7:)
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Anu Nayak
Date: 11/10/2016 11:32:00 AM
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Dear Jo, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words:) glad you liked my one liner:) you are generous Jo:)//love, Anu:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2016 6:31:00 AM
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fabulous imagery and alliteration anu:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anu Nayak
Date: 11/10/2016 11:31:00 AM
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Dear Jan, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words:) glad you liked my one liner:)//love, Anu:)
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/9/2016 6:23:00 AM
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I can well picture your one-liner, Anu. It's time for new owners to bring it back to life! ~ Regards // paul
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Anu Nayak
Date: 11/10/2016 11:30:00 AM
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Dear Paul, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words, yeah...its time there is a new change! its a fiction anyways:)//love, Anu:)

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