Anu Nayak Poet Monoku

Vanished Vitality

VANISHED VITALITY



Vibrant villa then, uninhabited now stands squalid with locked rusted gate







9th November 2016
For One Liner Contest
Sponsored by Rick Parise   
Theme- The Rusted Gate

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Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2016 at 8:47 PM You excel at these short alliterative one liners. Great vocabulary!!

Joanna Daniel November 9, 2016 at 7:03 AM Beautiful imagery in one line, Anu:) a 7:) Anu Nayak November 10, 2016 at 11:32 AM Dear Jo, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words:) glad you liked my one liner:) you are generous Jo:)//love, Anu:)

Jan Allison November 9, 2016 at 6:31 AM fabulous imagery and alliteration anu:-) hugs Jan xx Anu Nayak November 10, 2016 at 11:31 AM Dear Jan, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words:) glad you liked my one liner:)//love, Anu:)

Paul Callus November 9, 2016 at 6:23 AM I can well picture your one-liner, Anu. It's time for new owners to bring it back to life! ~ Regards // paul Anu Nayak November 10, 2016 at 11:30 AM Dear Paul, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words, yeah...its time there is a new change! its a fiction anyways:)//love, Anu:)