Joseph May Poet Rhyme

Vanilla Fondant

The wedding cake was vanilla fondant
 Its flavor did enchant
 But it was truly a surprise
 At how the cake was disguised

 The guests knew not where to start
 They'd never seen this before
 The groom took the first slice
 And then everyone came back for more

 All the guest had left Jenny Craig
 They were tired of that mess
 They ate and ate without finesse,
 The cake itself was the wedding dress!
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 2/22/17

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Andrea Dietrich March 16, 2017 at 9:19 PM Looking at this one again. I really liked it. Wish It had made winners' list.

Andrea Dietrich February 25, 2017 at 7:45 PM great imagination used here, JOseph. Good luck in the contest. Joseph May March 6, 2017 at 8:31 AM Thank you Andrea

Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2017 at 1:00 PM - Hope not her underwear could be eaten - A wonderful cake (poem), Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Joseph May February 22, 2017 at 6:31 PM Thanks Sunshine...Luckily she wasn't wearing any...:-)