The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

Vanilla Extraction

Soul is drawn to sky,
no wind or wave interrupts
heavens’ mirrored path.

For “Vanilla Sky” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Asuncion Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 11:03 PM
nice lines.... congrats on being selected...
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 11:03 PM
I love this one. It should have won for sure!!
Murphy Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 10:05 AM
very nice write good luck in the contest hope you are enjoying your weekend faleshia
Green Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Oooh, I like this one a lot.
 Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Interesting use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
Devonshire Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Very inspirational, John, and I love the title! Great haiku. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 8:33 AM
A nice haiku nicely expressed thoughts. Good luck
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 8:11 AM
Great Haiku that should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace