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Vanier Parkway

You trail the parkway with your grace  
Lusciousness of weeping willows
Gentle breeze with sways and billows

Surreal beyond commonplace  
Lavish greens beckon and entice
With promises of paradise

You reach out in a strong embrace 
Seductive alluring sultry
Hypnotic brush of artistry

Much how a mermaid would enlace
Take our breath away with her charm
So coyly beguile and disarm

And to reverie you give chase
Somersetting and minuetting
in this most idyllic setting   

You trail the parkway with your grace  
Surreal beyond the commonplace  
You reach out in a strong embrace 
Much how a mermaid would enlace
And to reverie you give chase 



AP: 3rd place 2020

Submitted on June 15, 2018 for contest NEW CONSTANZA sponsored by EMILE PINET  -  RANKED 4TH

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/23/2018 2:36:00 PM This wonderful constanza would be higher on the list for me Line. Amazing imagery! Congratulations on your win. I loved your entry. : ) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/23/2018 2:49:00 PM Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.

Beautiful Scars Date: 7/18/2018 10:48:00 AM beautiful poem LIne! congrats on your win :) -luloo Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/18/2018 12:26:00 PM Thank you, Laura. Most appreciated.

Susan Gentry Date: 7/17/2018 9:40:00 AM Congratulations on your win. This is a lovely soothing poem. Enjoyed. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/17/2018 9:49:00 AM Thank you Susan. Most appreciated.

Virginia Waters Date: 7/17/2018 3:35:00 AM Congratulations - this is my favourite - just so good - love the flow Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/17/2018 5:19:00 AM Thank you so much, Virginia. Most appreciated.

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 7/16/2018 11:13:00 PM Congratulations, Line on your win with such a lovely poem. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/17/2018 5:19:00 AM Thank you so much, Subimal. Most appreciated.

Brian Densham Date: 7/16/2018 12:27:00 PM Congratulations on a job well done. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/16/2018 8:24:00 PM Thank you, Brian. Much appreciated.

Emile Pinet Date: 7/16/2018 12:07:00 PM Congratulations Line, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/16/2018 8:23:00 PM Awesome. Thanks, Emile. Most appreciated.

Virginia Waters Date: 6/16/2018 1:30:00 AM mmm hypnotically enticing meditation. Feel ready to drift off magically saturated. Bet its a winner = love always Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/16/2018 11:12:00 AM Thank you so much for your vote of confidence, Virginia. Most appreciated.

Lyric Man Date: 6/15/2018 11:04:00 PM Alluring lines that pull you in.. awesome piece, Line! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/16/2018 12:00:00 AM Thank you so much, Chance. Most appreciated.