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Vanier Parkway

You trail the parkway with your grace Lusciousness of weeping willows Gentle breeze with sways and billows Surreal beyond commonplace Lavish greens beckon and entice With promises of paradise You reach out in a strong embrace Seductive alluring sultry Hypnotic brush of artistry Much how a mermaid would enlace Take our breath away with her charm So coyly beguile and disarm And to reverie you give chase Somersetting and minuetting in this most idyllic setting You trail the parkway with your grace Surreal beyond the commonplace You reach out in a strong embrace Much how a mermaid would enlace And to reverie you give chase AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on June 15, 2018 for contest NEW CONSTANZA sponsored by EMILE PINET - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 7/23/2018 2:36:00 PM
This wonderful constanza would be higher on the list for me Line. Amazing imagery! Congratulations on your win. I loved your entry. : )
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Date: 7/23/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/18/2018 10:48:00 AM
beautiful poem LIne! congrats on your win :) -luloo
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Date: 7/18/2018 12:26:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/17/2018 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. This is a lovely soothing poem. Enjoyed.
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Date: 7/17/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/17/2018 3:35:00 AM
Congratulations - this is my favourite - just so good - love the flow
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Date: 7/17/2018 5:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Virginia. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/16/2018 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations, Line on your win with such a lovely poem.
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Date: 7/17/2018 5:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Subimal. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/16/2018 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on a job well done.
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Date: 7/16/2018 8:24:00 PM
Thank you, Brian. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/16/2018 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations Line, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 7/16/2018 8:23:00 PM
Awesome. Thanks, Emile. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/16/2018 1:30:00 AM
mmm hypnotically enticing meditation. Feel ready to drift off magically saturated. Bet its a winner = love always
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Date: 6/16/2018 11:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for your vote of confidence, Virginia. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/15/2018 11:04:00 PM
Alluring lines that pull you in.. awesome piece, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/16/2018 12:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Chance. Most appreciated.

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