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Vanidad

As waves of turquoise green amble back to the deep, amber moon looks at its shadow upon the sea.

7/16/2017



 vanidad- spanish for vanity
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Salehi Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 3:28 AM
Eve very Beautiful indeed....
Kiser Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 10:29 AM
You hit the imagery right on that nail head.
Downing  Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 2:53 PM
Picture perfect beautiful monoku :)
Callus Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 1:53 PM
How beautiful, Eve! I love both the poem and the picture which accompanies it. The moon, being female, cannot be criticized for being vain:) (To be honest, even men can fall victim to vanity...perhaps that is why we Maltese consider the moon to be male!!) Warm regards // paul
Sathasivam Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 1:17 AM
Excellent poetic monoku. Beautiful picture too. Thanks for sharing it.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 6:34 PM
oh wow, I love how you employed the Spanish word for it. SO awesome, Eve!
Sands Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 3:12 PM
This is an outstanding Monoku. So beautiful and the photo perfect too :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 1:53 PM
So beautiful! Very profound!
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