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Vanessa the Caramel Queen

There's a lovely girl called Vanessa who's prone to foods so very sweet especially that of the chewy variety such a temptation she falls off her feet This beautiful girl is a real stunner but that doesn't help her beat her treat a Queen she's undoubtedly crowned royal standard accomplished a poetic feat There she goes a bag of sweets in hand caramel her big favourite nothing to compare this is the one she loves above all else chewing every part one can only stare Her unhealthy diet easy to mind breakfast, lunch, dinner and supper all always the same guess what? caramel every time along with a cuppa Well, one can't believe such a thing but this is so chewable and green could it be true well let's ask Vanessa? hey, honey are you the caramel Queen? This 1st November was a special day for Vanessa's birthday came around a real celebration come to New Mexico way Poetic class, this lovely lady is real sound! (This is a fun piece I had written to a poetry friend on another poetry site)

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Date: 11/13/2018 8:44:00 AM
Very nice. I enjoyed this Gordon :)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/13/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, Glad you enjoyed it, have a great day, Gordon
Date: 11/13/2018 3:24:00 AM
what a sweet poem indeed i hope Vanessa relished every word:-) hugs jan xx
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/13/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, Glad you enjoyed it and I hope so too! it was for a contest which hasn't been judged yet so we'll see. Have a blessed day, Gordonxx

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