Vanessa the Caramel Queen
There's a lovely girl called Vanessa
who's prone to foods so very sweet
especially that of the chewy variety
such a temptation she falls off her feet
This beautiful girl is a real stunner
but that doesn't help her beat her treat
a Queen she's undoubtedly crowned
royal standard accomplished a poetic feat
There she goes a bag of sweets in hand
caramel her big favourite nothing to compare
this is the one she loves above all else
chewing every part one can only stare
Her unhealthy diet easy to mind
breakfast, lunch, dinner and supper
all always the same guess what?
caramel every time along with a cuppa
Well, one can't believe such a thing
but this is so chewable and green
could it be true well let's ask Vanessa?
hey, honey are you the caramel Queen?
This 1st November was a special day
for Vanessa's birthday came around
a real celebration come to New Mexico way
Poetic class, this lovely lady is real sound!
(This is a fun piece I had written to a poetry friend on another poetry site)
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