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Vampires

They have been here for thousands of years, walking among us in our fears. Creatures of blood with power and might, they come in the dark, they come in the night. Eyes that look into your soul, you feel the power, they take control. Your body rises as you bleed, their blood lust uncontrolled as they feed. The spirit taken from this life, to join the children of the night. JSergi Contest: Poems from the Vampire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/8/2013 6:57:00 AM
Well done Joseph xx
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/8/2013 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Mandy for your post
Date: 12/7/2013 1:24:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Joseph
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/7/2013 7:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram
Date: 12/6/2013 6:12:00 PM
Very well written and deserving win.
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/6/2013 7:49:00 PM
Thank you very much Mark
Date: 12/6/2013 5:06:00 PM
Scary, congrats.
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/6/2013 7:50:00 PM
Thank You Richard
Date: 11/26/2013 7:52:00 PM
Emotional vampires are everywhere living on our fear and draining us of our strength . Playing with us to satisfy their own needs until we say enough. These Vampires also must be invited into ones life so play it cool man and keep your guard up.
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 9:05:00 PM
Thanks Michael your words ring with truth!
Date: 11/25/2013 11:27:00 PM
Great poem, Joseph! Nice flow and rhyme! Love the vampire theme! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for the kind comments on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 9:07:00 PM
Thank You Kelly! Glad you liked this one
Date: 11/25/2013 5:25:00 PM
A dark write about a sad creature whos been around along time. cheri
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 9:07:00 PM
So true thank you for your words

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