Vampire of Love

She was a vampire of love
sinking her teeth into my heart
drawing my passion
leaving me lifeless in the dark

Now I'm the walking dead
another victim of the night
where she preyed upon me
left me hopeless without sight

So before you walk beneath the moon
under those beautiful stars above
I feel I must warn you
beware the vampire of love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bess Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 9:22 AM
like this poem because the concepts was there. and i like the how you talk about the as a vampire
Adams Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 7:16 PM
Wow I feel your heart in these words! Clever and intresting way of explaining the abusement of your heart; "sinking her teeth into my heart" i love that line! very lovely poem! Much love, ~Catherine:)
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