Vampire Haiku

His blood flowing warm
she drinks it like chocolate
grasping and screaming...
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chakrabarty Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 9:26 AM
grasping and screaming. vampire screams.Gosh!..nice indeed very impressive specially the "chocolate"...love >>>>>rajat
Sietesantos Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 7:00 AM
Oooh! This is a magnificent haiku - I love it! Don't mess with vampire blood! Pandita
Mcdaid Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 12:20 AM
superb haiku pal like this style ken
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:19 PM
ooh deep and dark clever haiku. hugs Jan xxx
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