Angela Crabtree Poet Rhyme

Vampire Bride

Breaking of agile pieces of flesh you have torn
taking this fragile soul as a mask you have worn
trust is a magnet; A fake crown I humbly wear
thrusts have become stagnant and beyond my repair

Lying in darkness the dead now awake
trying through harshness you drive in the stake
silence is beckoned by your foolish pride
reliance is reckoned as you walk in stride

Frightened now I walk this shallow ground
heightened you balk, yet loudly you sound
showing resolute what you handle well
growing ever desolate in our bondage of hell

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Paul Callus December 4, 2020 at 12:37 PM A dark and eerie write, Angela; perfect for Halloween! Regards // paul Angela Crabtree December 4, 2020 at 5:56 PM Thank you, Paul. I was in the mood at the time :)

Gershon Wolf October 17, 2020 at 6:35 PM Ah, but this is a deep, dark dip that my dark side thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks, Angela! :) gw Angela Crabtree October 17, 2020 at 6:45 PM Thank you, Gershon. I'm glad you liked it. I think we all have a little bit of a dark side that occasionally will surface ;)

Tom Cunningham October 17, 2020 at 8:22 AM A chilling verse Angela, with hints of Poe, Well written. Quite an appropriate verse for the forthcoming Halloween. Hope your weekend going well. Tom Angela Crabtree October 17, 2020 at 6:43 PM Thank you, Tom. I really appreciate that. Halloween inspired me a little ;)

Vijay Pandit October 17, 2020 at 5:41 AM Your words resonate with intensity, Angela--emotions well captured. Angela Crabtree October 17, 2020 at 6:40 PM Thank you, Vijay. It just kind of came out that way ;)

Silent One October 17, 2020 at 3:19 AM Dark and spooky write.. I must say im not a bit fan of Halloween, but it seems to inspire a lot of poets.. Angela Crabtree October 17, 2020 at 6:39 PM Thank you, Silent One. With everything on television about Halloween, it kind of inspired me to write something. :)

Victor Buhagiar October 17, 2020 at 2:02 AM Halloween seems to inspire many writers, Wonderful rhymed poem. ~~ Angela Crabtree October 17, 2020 at 6:37 PM Thank you, Victor. There's so many Halloween type of movies on television right now that I thought I would write something in that style :)

Caren Krutsinger October 16, 2020 at 8:55 PM Ah, this has such a wonderful Halloween feeling to it. My muse Trixie and I are both clapping. Angela Crabtree October 17, 2020 at 6:32 PM Thank you, Caren. I'm glad you liked it :)