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Vampire a Go Go

Just off the beaten path in a unasuming bar. Porcelin skin dark angles do thirst. Like a dark vision you do not question for there they are. Loud music they move in sync. Luring there prey to back rooms. For a fatal dance and a final drink. Dark beauty I you offer me a dance but i dont really know. Wicked are the ways at the vampire a go go. Long dark hair cold black eyes. Her movements haunt the stage. Like a spider your caught within her web as the bite muffles your cries. Its said never stray from the beaten path. Neon sign cuts through the night. Yes this club is a real blood bath. Like a moth to a flame lost souls are drawn to the flames glow. Its just another fright filled night at the vampire a go go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/29/2010 10:57:00 AM
You hardly see any one writing about vamps. Wolfs, Zombies. I have enjoyed. Intresting.
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:49:00 AM
Another "beauty" ..imaginative and vividly visual scenes ... u should do extremely well when the Halloween contest start being posted this year.. u have my vote Dr. Igor.. luv the full monty of a name... ingenious and inventive.. like your poetry .. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" who just luvs the color RED...and BLACK...
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Date: 2/3/2010 5:42:00 AM
I enjoyed reading you poem this morning Dr. Thank you for posting and sharing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2010 12:25:00 PM
Im ready to give this place a go, just see if i could tame the Vamp, make him kind, lettin me go without a bite..Ow no im so afraiiiiiiddd:)Enjoyed reading you Doctor,lol--Charma
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:50:00 AM
Now this is one bar I don't want to visit, Dr. Von Graves. Love this "wicked" write about the lost souls who enter this dangerous place. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:28:00 AM
Hey, are you describing the titty twister bar? My husband was watching this really weird movie the other night and that was the name of the bar in Mexico where the vampires killed their prey. It was a disgusting movie,and I sneaked a few peaks while working on a poem! haha. LUv, andrea ps. thanks for your groundhog comments!
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:14:00 AM
Nice! This is really good. Good descriptions of Vampire's!!! But i still like Werewolves Better!!! *Howls at Moon* Lol. Nice write.
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