Vampire

I feed on human blood -
Before, I lived on meat;
You think I’ll be your friend?
Just pray we never meet…

Jack Horne for Archaic’s Poems from the Vampire contest

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Audrey Haick

December 11, 2013 at 10:26 PM

!! Congratulatoions on your win!! Well deserved. x Always, Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 8, 2013 at 7:09 AM

Love it, Jack congratulations xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 7, 2013 at 4:56 AM

Congrats on the win, Jack

Jon A Cavanaugh

December 5, 2013 at 10:04 PM

Love it. How very clever. I think this will do very well in the contest. You got a big chuckle from me. well done!

Phyllis Babcock

November 28, 2013 at 9:49 AM

Nicely written Jack. love phyl

The Situation

November 28, 2013 at 1:33 AM

great entry. long is over rated.

Nette Onclaud

November 27, 2013 at 2:27 PM

okay, i'm running away from you now.. super piece in just a few lines, jack... greeat stuff!..huggs

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

November 26, 2013 at 12:07 AM

Aha which vampire is dat? I wudnt like to meet it either. Super rhymin brief poem! Enjoyd readin. And thanx.

Dinda Minardi

November 25, 2013 at 9:26 PM

wooww.. this was fun to read, Javk. thanks for stopping by :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 25, 2013 at 8:22 PM

I liked this, Jack. I'm afraid to click on your other little ones not knowing if one is for my contest or not!!! Gotta go now and get dinner for Joe. You were nearly my last one to see today. Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

November 25, 2013 at 7:53 PM

I can't think of one for this yet [pout] the muse is on vacation? Good luck! Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

November 25, 2013 at 6:00 PM

Scary work that you have penned for the contest..This is your kind of contest..Sara

Russell Sivey

November 25, 2013 at 5:32 PM

He Hee, woe, now that is a great Vampire write my friend! "Just pray we never meet..." wow, now that is quite a line there! I really loved reading this illustrious poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!