Eve Roper Poet Verse

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Value Yourself More Then Critics

it was time
spent my dime
on soup prime
try to rhyme
long hard climb

lyrics weak
critics seek
petty clique
black and bleak
tried turn cheek


1/1/2022

What's New Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

 3 syllables per line.. 
The rhyme scheme is a/a/a/a/a for the first stanza 
and b/b/b/b/b for the second stanza. 

https://www.howmanysyllables.com/

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Paula Goldsmith January 19, 2022 at 8:49 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!! What a title and write. Love It. We should all do this. Have a blessed day with hugs..............

Kim Merryman January 19, 2022 at 7:08 AM Eve, your thoughts are so well expressed! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex January 17, 2022 at 9:34 PM "Value Yourself More Then Critics" - Very meaningful title. The whole poem is beautifully written in this new style. Congratulations!

Joseph May January 17, 2022 at 8:02 PM Very nicely penned Eve, Congrats on your win

M. L. Kiser January 4, 2022 at 10:02 AM Ooh, well penned!

Tom Cunningham January 3, 2022 at 1:45 AM What you write is a winner every time, what others think is immaterial. Write for thee not they. Hope your new year is off to a good start Eve. Tom

Rico Leffanta January 2, 2022 at 11:13 AM If people could express their thoughts as well as you have just done, it would be an entirely different world! Enjoyed! Eve Roper January 2, 2022 at 2:23 PM Thank you, Rico, but I doubt it will place. Happy New Year my dear friend with lots of hugs and love

Victor Buhagiar January 2, 2022 at 1:26 AM This poem jumps in leaps and bounds. Very well done. Best for a win. Hugs.