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Value: Continous Rhyme Poem

I'm running out of patience patience is growing thin thin like me me who has no form no form or shape shape eludes me me the writer of this tale tale of my life my life has little value value not worth mentioning in this poem poem of little value value that eludes me at this moment moment of judging judging souls souls of little value value not worth mentioning not worth mentioning in this poem poem about death death means nothing to me at this moment moment of judging judging souls souls about to disappear disappear forever forever is nothing nothing to a soul of little value value not worth mentioning not worth mentioning in this poem poem of little value. (This is a style that my brother call continuous rhyme poetry. Hope that everyone will enjoy this style of poetry. We have a lot of styles that have not been heard of before just is the beginning.)

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Date: 1/24/2014 5:30:00 AM
I really liked your style, James. We used to play a game of words that followed the same style. You made me remember all those childhood days . // SMILES //
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Date: 1/18/2014 2:16:00 PM
Me likes it :)
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Date: 1/16/2014 4:14:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,James- I choose your first well done poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:12:00 PM
The ides, style, and flow are amazing... James..., I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/15/2014 7:05:00 PM
I wish to learn this style James, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/15/2014 6:11:00 PM
This is new I like it.
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