James Wilson Poet I do not know?

Value: Continous Rhyme Poem

I'm running out of patience
patience is growing thin
thin like me
me who has no form 
no form or shape
shape eludes me 
me the writer of this tale
tale of my life
my life has little value
value not worth mentioning in this poem
poem of little value
value that eludes me at this moment
moment of judging 
judging souls
souls of little value
value not worth mentioning
not worth mentioning in this poem
poem about death
death means nothing to me at this moment
moment of judging
judging souls 
souls about to disappear 
disappear forever
forever is nothing
nothing to a soul of little value 
value not worth mentioning
not worth mentioning in this poem
poem of little value. 

(This is a style that my brother call continuous rhyme poetry.
Hope that everyone will enjoy this style of poetry.
We have a lot of styles that have not been heard of before just is the beginning.)

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Archana Garg January 24, 2014 at 5:30 AM I really liked your style, James. We used to play a game of words that followed the same style. You made me remember all those childhood days . // SMILES //

Fatima Hasan Zaidi January 18, 2014 at 2:16 PM Me likes it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2014 at 4:14 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,James- I choose your first well done poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2014 at 9:12 PM The ides, style, and flow are amazing... James..., I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A January 15, 2014 at 7:05 PM I wish to learn this style James, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

James Wilson January 15, 2014 at 6:11 PM This is new I like it.