"valley of Lost Hope"

Dead men lying on the bottom of the grave
wondering when savior comes
Is he going to be saved
maybe you're a sinner into your alternate life
maybe you're a joker,maybe you deserve to die

They were crying when their sons left
god is wearing black
he's gone so far to find no hope 
he's never coming back...

They were crying when their sons left 
all young men must go
he's come so far to find the truth
he's never going home

Young men standing at the tops of their graves
wondering when jesus comes 
are they gonna be saved

Cruelty to the loser,Bishop tells the King
maybe you're a mourner,or just deserve to die
they were crying when their sons left
god is wearing black
he's gone so far to find no hope
he's never coming back

They were crying when their sons left 
all young men must go
he's come so far to find no truth
he's never going home

Welcome to the soldier side
where there's no one here but me
people all grow up to die
there is no one here but me

Welcome to the soldier side
sons come here to die
people on the soldiers side ....
come here,but be willing to die....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 10, 2010 at 10:40 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoyed your creative write tonight.. hope u check out the contest scene .. and enter ..good luck with luv..
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September 10, 2010 at 12:16 PM
What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Kristen. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2010 at 10:46 PM
Nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
Mehta Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 8:11 PM
A nice well composed write valley of lost hope on the Faith, Kristen
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