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Valley of Gloom

bleeding wounds in the dark rooms of the crying heart flowers of blood pollinate singing birds confess to the forbidden wind swirling unsuckled nipples sob in the valley of gloom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/28/2015 7:05:00 PM
Tremendous phrasing and imagery! Well done my friend!! Best wishes, Keith
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/28/2015 7:41:00 PM
thanks keith, master of verse
Date: 12/28/2015 9:32:00 AM
Good grief, so much darkness and powerful imagery in so few words...
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/28/2015 7:01:00 PM
thanks gail

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