Valley and Mountain

Valley and Mountain

The valley in our lives is so often our own
hates, jealousies, and faults. 

The mountain standing majestic and tall 
is Love in all forms.

It beckons you, it says come here and find
what is in yourself.

Some think you need to be on top to have it all
others know this is not it at all.

The base of any mountain of Love is where the
top is found.

It bounds and bounds all around knowing the
steps to be take by all.

It is one at time as we come and go but best
of all this is not all.

It is more than standing majestic being tall or
trying to beat all.

It’s being there, for all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/13/2015 6:57:00 AM
"It’s being there, for all" Nicely written my friend! I enjoyed reading it! Cheers!
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John Hardison
Date: 1/14/2015 11:33:00 PM
Thanks for you comment.TYFC. Could have been titled Be There for All but thought Be There is over used. Best to end with it.
Date: 1/13/2015 3:52:00 AM
full of wisdom poem.. :)thanks for the visit..olive eloisa
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John Hardison
Date: 1/14/2015 11:27:00 PM
Thank for your comment. TFYC. Wisdom is often beyond the wise.
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