Valley

We enter the valley
Of shadows
Of thorns
A narrow path
Well worn

Where friends
Have travelled
Tattered, torn
No sunlight
Before new dawn

We said
Goodbye
Our souls forlorn
Yet hopeful joy
To be reborn

CV
19.01.24

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Hiya Sharma

January 21, 2024 at 8:38 PM

Oh this is truly a transformative write dear Cindy, I especially love how evocative it is, with forlorn feeling when a soul is worn out, on the edge of resilience and wishing to be reborn as a hopeful dawn.. This touched my heart, as it's so resonating too, your rhymes are absolutely impeccable and giving a rich flow to these words.. Absolutely a heartfelt read it was, conveying vivid emotions with an effortlessly tone.. Sending you so many best wishes & light ~

Cynthia Vipond

January 21, 2024 at 10:05 PM

Thank you dear Hiya x I am enjoying reading your eloquent poems now too. Best Cindy x