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Valley

We enter the valley
Of shadows
Of thorns
A narrow path
Well worn

Where friends
Have travelled
Tattered, torn
No sunlight
Before new dawn

We said
Goodbye
Our souls forlorn
Yet hopeful joy
To be reborn

CV
19.01.24

Copyright © Cynthia Vipond | Year Posted 2024

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Hiya Sharma Date: 1/21/2024 8:38:00 PM Oh this is truly a transformative write dear Cindy, I especially love how evocative it is, with forlorn feeling when a soul is worn out, on the edge of resilience and wishing to be reborn as a hopeful dawn.. This touched my heart, as it's so resonating too, your rhymes are absolutely impeccable and giving a rich flow to these words.. Absolutely a heartfelt read it was, conveying vivid emotions with an effortlessly tone.. Sending you so many best wishes & light ~ Login to Reply Cynthia Vipond Date: 1/21/2024 10:05:00 PM Thank you dear Hiya x I am enjoying reading your eloquent poems now too. Best Cindy x

Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/21/2024 10:16:00 AM This poem had a rhythmic rhyme and thoughtful story of change. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks. Login to Reply Cynthia Vipond Date: 1/21/2024 10:03:00 PM Once again bless you dear Hilda. Best Cindy x

Paul Bell Date: 1/21/2024 3:00:00 AM I like the reborn bit. If only I could change some things in my new life. Login to Reply Cynthia Vipond Date: 1/21/2024 7:42:00 AM Change is where hope lives, Paul dear. Pain is the great teacher but no-one wants to go to his classes. Best Cindy x (and thanks for calling by)