a valentino
unrhymed couplets
fourteen syllables per line
seven couplets steps to heaven
fourteen lines to date it
a style we came up with something different
Temptation pulls us all into sin with gravity force Wading in with human desires sweet sugar coating gloss Strengths are nurtured and grown from our creator's breath of light Filtering through densely chaotic thoughts stony cold walls Snowdrops open their blossoms stretching a smile to your spring Sprouting faith, hope, love and luck from a four-leaf white clover Daffodils dance with a twirl around a twilight star breeze Floating around magical melodies of twin flames spark Shimmering dusk and dawn of your soul commanding presence Soaring light chestnut brown kestrel swooping down in hunger Low down in the horizon gracious mother of the rose Sweet pleasant fragrance sets sail on the bitter winds of change Queen of the evening sky you stand out a beautiful face Radiating happiness amidst the flurries of rain A co written piece by Liam Mc Daid and Angeline Lin
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