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Author’s Notes:  "Valentine's Unicorn" is a special rhymed couplet that I've written which touches on the fantasy legend of the mystical Unicorn and the ethereal ideal she presents to all of us who cherish harmony, peace, and love always.  I thought that this would be a great theme to present as part of the shared loved that most of us feel or at least strive for on Valentine's Day.  And, I'm dedicating this special poem to my wife Ingrid who just happens to love Unicorns as I do.  (Gary Bateman - February 9, 2015) (Rhymed Couplet)

Categories:  emotions, feelings, happiness, love, metaphor, spiritual, and together.

Valentine's Unicorn

Valentine’s Unicorn

A magical and most wonderful creature of times old,
With a holy soul filled with love and a heart of gold. 

Harmony, peace, and love pervade her very essence,
And they define all that is good and grand in her presence.

She loves poets, musicians, and all of us who so often dream,
And visits us all in ethereal visions on a radiant light beam. 

This Valentine’s Unicorn is a precious bearer of purest love,
Who possesses angelic power from the very Heavens above.

She lives in our hearts and souls as an enchanted dream,
And shares her love and trust with us all as we dream.

She shares our dreams past, present, and future—
And shall always be a spirit of majestic love in our future.
                                                                                                                      
On Valentine’s Day her love is felt on Earth and in Heaven above,
As she sends us harmony, peace, and love on the wings of a dove!

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (February 9, 2015)
(Rhymed Couplet)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 4/17/2015 5:22:00 AM
More poems. Why aren't you writing more poems. Miss you and your's. Jim Horn
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Gary Bateman
Date: 4/17/2015 7:48:00 AM
Jim, I tried to send you a soup mail. Don't know if it went through or not. I've been away to finish the publication of my new book called: "Conversations with My Muse" which is now available for order at Amazon.com. I expect to be back with "PS" by next month. Many new poems to post. I hope all is well. Best to you and your family. Gary
Date: 2/25/2015 4:52:00 PM
I have no doubt that Ingrid is pleased; this is beautiful Gary.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/25/2015 5:44:00 PM
ML, The "Unicorn" was actually her idea. I managed to put the words to it. I too liked how this one turned out. Ingrid and I will be doing more co-writes in the future. I have some we've done but not yet posted because of my book edit, etc. Best Wishes Always, Gary
Date: 2/15/2015 2:59:00 PM
So nice to read your romantic verse on this chilly Sunday afternoon. Light & Love
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/19/2015 3:26:00 PM
Hello Debbie . . . Glad you enjoyed "Valentine's Unicorn" here. I enjoyed writing on this particular romantic theme. Best Always, Gary
Date: 2/13/2015 6:31:00 PM
I love this sire...careful attention to the form and fluid flow...Happy Valentine hugs from the land of thousand isles...Kim:)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/19/2015 3:29:00 PM
Hello Kim . . . Thanks for your visit and read, and I'm pleased you enjoyed my write here. (I've been away from Poetry Soup for a while as I'm working on the final stages of my book edit. I will be posting again in March. The deadline to my publisher is next week!!) Best Wishes Always, Gary
Date: 2/12/2015 1:19:00 PM
A phenomenally said poem Gary. Wow, you really seem to like rhyme just like me and you can really construct it. That's a good one!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/19/2015 3:35:00 PM
Hello Choene!! Thanks for your read here and your note. I'm pretty much a multi-thematic writer and try to write all types of poetry. (I have much yet to learn!!) Be that as it may, like you, I tend to prefer rhymed writes and rhymed and metered writes. The flow of words with rhyme and meter and metaphor is truly magical!! This really makes poetry glorious!! Best Always, Gary
Date: 2/10/2015 4:56:00 PM
a truly magical pen gary regal flowing gold in this piece bowled the mind over smiling
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/10/2015 5:38:00 PM
Liam Mate!! Thanks so much for your visit and read. I'm glad you liked it. (We should consider a co-write in the future where a Leprechaun meets or comes face-to-face with a Unicorn. This might be a interesting theme full of possibilities.) Cheers, Gary
Date: 2/10/2015 12:45:00 PM
- Gary, this is so soft and beautiful - Floats so peacefully, sparkles of love - A pleasure to read ..... and I've already read it 3 times !!!! - Without a doubt one fav. and a mega 7 - Thank you my friend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/10/2015 12:57:00 PM
Anne-Lise, Thanks!! for your read and most wonderful comments here. This one is indeed quite special -- and the idea for it actually came from Ingrid. I knew that Unicorns are special for her (and now me too), and I wanted to write a Unicorn theme for her for Valentine's Day. Thanks for the mega 7 + FAV!!Happy Valentine's Day to you -- and Best Wishes Always, Gary
Date: 2/10/2015 12:39:00 PM
What a beautiful image of love,Gary, Happy Valentine's Day. 7 Blessing to you and your family Eve
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/10/2015 1:01:00 PM
Hello Eve!! Thanks so much for your read and wonderful comment here -- and for the "7" too!! Ingrid and I wish you and your family too great blessings!! Happy Valentine's Day!! Best Always, Gary
Date: 2/9/2015 2:27:00 PM
Mein freund, Gary, wie get es ihnen? Hope all is well and wish you success in every way for your upcoming book! Your poem is beautiful and tender but it becomes majestic and celestial when one thinks to whom is dedicated. May Valentine's Unicorn bring love and happiness to every heart! A seven my friend!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/10/2015 12:52:00 PM
You are indeed very kind to say this Demetrios!! I look forward sharing my book with you. I'm honored that your would put my book between Homer and Pindar -- I hope they don't mind!! Best Wishes and Thanks!! Gary
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/9/2015 2:55:00 PM
An autographed copy would be a great honor! I will put it between Homer and Pindar! Thank you!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/9/2015 2:42:00 PM
Ich bedanke mich sehr Herr Professor!! Alles ist bei Mir OK!! I thought you might like this particular poem and the theme!! I will keep you posted about my book. If you like, I can send you an autographed copy later after it's released. It will be entitled: "Conversations with My Muse" -- A Book of Selected Poetry. This will be the first of many more books of poetry (and short stories) that I hope to write. Best Valentine's Wishes from Ingrid and me!! Gary
Date: 2/9/2015 12:07:00 PM
Hello G! Wow! Another Valentine beautiful pen Gary! I love unicorns too and this one I truly enjoyed it a lot! Beautifully painted and the imagery is so fantastic and enchantingly written, my dearest friend. A huge 7 +++ from me! Your pen is mighty golden as always! Give my love to Ingrid! You two have a very wonderful day! In His light! God bless you always! :) Love n hugs! xoxox D."
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Date: 2/9/2015 1:40:00 PM
Hello D! Thanks for your wonderful note and comments here!! And for the Super Seven Rating!! The "Unicorn" theme is always quite magical and very interesting to write about. I decided yesterday to do one more Valentine's poem for Ingrid before dropping off-line with "PS" for the new few weeks. Glad I did. I was very pleased with how this Couplet turned out. (I had considered doing a Sonnet, but think I made the better choice with the Couplet format.) Continued best wishes from Ingrid and me to you "D"!! Gary XO!!
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