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Valentine's Hug

No flowers or candy can express the feelings of love I did possess. Your kind words and your gentle caress would evoke the greatest happiness. I could read emotions on your face, the ones that led to passion’s embrace. The strings to my heart you could unlace and time will not these feelings erase. For now I can only see you smile when I stare at the clouds for a while. The love I felt walking down the aisle made all life’s challenges feel worthwhile. I need no gifts from a love so true; I adored you at first sight, first view. A Valentine’s hug I send to you, knowing I’ll join you when this life’s through.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/6/2019 5:33:00 PM
How beautiful, such loving emotion, sweet and pure. Congrats on your deserving win, Carolyn
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Date: 1/6/2019 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn!
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Date: 1/6/2019 5:13:00 PM
This is such a sweet beautiful poem, Carolyn, congrats on your win
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Date: 1/6/2019 4:38:00 PM
So beautiful, Carolyn. Congrats for your worthy win.
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Date: 1/6/2019 4:12:00 PM
Sweet, and straight from the heart! Kudos to you, Carolyn, on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Date: 1/6/2019 4:12:00 PM
Sweet, and straight from the heart! Kudos to you, Carolyn, on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Date: 2/11/2017 5:21:00 AM
A very lovable read!
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Date: 2/7/2017 5:25:00 PM
WoW! Oh WoW! This is so emotionally charged it touched me to my core. It really brought a tear to my eye. You really are an excellent poetess my friend. This took my breath away. From 1 to 7 this is a 10. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/6/2017 10:50:00 PM
So touching Carolyn.
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Date: 2/4/2017 5:19:00 AM
So touching...a message of love to the other realm. Beautiful. Congrats. :)
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Date: 2/3/2017 10:13:00 PM
So full of lovely emotions and romantically beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/3/2017 5:59:00 PM
just beautiful Carolyn, congrats on your win
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Date: 2/3/2017 11:20:00 AM
Sad and beautiful both at once. The memory you experience makes the piece more happy than sad. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/2/2017 6:35:00 PM
this is SO beautiful, dear Carolyn. I bet he cannot wait to see you again. We have to know that there is another life where our loved ones are waiting!
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Date: 2/1/2017 5:39:00 PM
Oh i am so glad to see you again Carolyn, thanks for the visit to my poetry, i see you have lost none of your flare, this poem is so beautiful, so sincere, so you...
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Date: 2/1/2017 3:31:00 PM
Love dwells in every verse and walks hand in hand with memories and and that most special reunion. Carolyn, this is wonderful! My best to you, chuck
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Date: 1/31/2017 8:31:00 PM
A simple rhyme, a special love, a lovely moment, congratulations Carolyn...
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Date: 1/31/2017 7:00:00 PM
Captures the heart dear lady and reveals a tender love true to its birth, yet to have had such a love gives breath to its sadness
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Date: 1/31/2017 4:22:00 PM
Yes, love, and memories such as these can never be erased, Carolyn. A lovely and touching poem that pulls at the reader's heartstrings. // Have been finding it hard to access internet, but should have now solved the problem; managed to post a short poem, too. Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/31/2017 8:35:00 AM
A beautiful but sad heartfelt write, Mrs Carolyn.
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Date: 1/30/2017 11:31:00 PM
Wow such a heartwarming sentimental poem to a beloved spouse passed on, he will sure to be raining kisses on u from heaven pal. Awesome rhyming and flow and u ought to frame this. Kudos. Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest. And hapy new yr.
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Date: 1/30/2017 7:21:00 PM
Such a wonderfully beautiful romantic poem, and my favorite line was "The strings to my heart you could unlace" oh la la!
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Date: 1/30/2017 6:57:00 PM
Cut straight to my heart Carolyn, all the best and God bless. This poem is going to my favorites my dear...
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Date: 1/31/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thank you, Keith. Let me see what you've been up to...
Date: 1/30/2017 5:15:00 PM
A beautiful poem Carolyn. I can feel the love you hold for him.
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Date: 1/30/2017 5:14:00 PM
Oh my Carolyn, this beautiful poem has touched my heart and caused it to break at the same time. I'm not even sure what to say except this was absolutely beautiful and thank you for sharing this with us.
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