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Valentines Day

To the one i love and the mother of my child: Will you be my Valentine? Just hold my hand in the other dimension, The one where love is forever and all our desires are met. You dont have to see me or talk to me: just a note. That says on some far reaching place, You do love me. Forget Yesterday, and Today: They are only the stepping stones leading, To our real purpose, Some point in the future. We will laugh at this drama. Both ignorant and lost, just looking for love, as we each imagine love Should be. P.S. Today there was a beautiful solar flare on my side of the sun. It was Ultra-violet Instead of orange or red. An anomoly worth contemplation. M

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Date: 1/10/2013 4:38:00 PM
Good poem. Hmm... about the post script. Shall I compare thee to a mid-summer's day? - JH
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Date: 2/12/2010 5:09:00 PM
thanks for your comment. I did upgrade, although Tom was one I was in love with at the time I met Larry, but he wouldn't have worked out I'm sure. What was meant to be is what is. Enjoyed your poem. Love is everything. Ellen
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Date: 2/12/2010 4:20:00 PM
I enjoyed the read an excellent valentines message. Sorry I'm not very good at riddles.
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Date: 2/12/2010 3:49:00 PM
Can anyone decode the last line in the post script? What do you think that means. This is a riddle for you. Any thoughts would be appreciated.
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