Valentines

"Icicle" 

From the frosty eaves 
The winter's glass is hanging
Your hand in my hand 



"Eternally"  

The sun has risen 
The white rose is trembling 
You, always, always 



"Aurora"

The heavenly lights 
Bathe her cheeks in red and pink 
Are the stars aligned?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/17/2013 8:18:00 AM
I like the way you did this one, congratulations. Have a look at the Questionku form in the form section. I think with your poetic ability you could easily master the form and have fun in the process.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/17/2013 2:53:00 PM
Oh it's 456 , I see. Oh, well. Hah. Congrats to you too, Richard
Date: 2/16/2013 11:24:00 PM
Congratulations my dear Jeremy for your very lovely write and super win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/17/2013 2:46:00 PM
Awww, thanks :)
Date: 2/16/2013 11:06:00 PM
these are beautiful, Jeremy. Congrats on your awesome win.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/17/2013 2:45:00 PM
Likewise on yours, Andrea. Thanks for reading!
Date: 2/16/2013 4:51:00 PM
Excellent work here for sure, Jeremy...congrats on the big win
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/17/2013 2:45:00 PM
Thanks, Caleb! You, too
Date: 2/16/2013 1:50:00 PM
Jeremy, out of all the fascinating entries.. i fell in love with your entry. Congratulations with your masterpiece.xox~LINDA835h
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/16/2013 1:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Linda. That means a lot to me. I really enjoyed writing them
Date: 2/12/2013 10:23:00 PM
Jeremy, hope this is for my contest... if so... did not mean 2 peek... always~ LINDA
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/13/2013 6:16:00 PM
It is. Happy almost Valentine's Day and thanks for visiting :)
Date: 2/9/2013 7:52:00 PM
Nicely done, Jeremy! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/10/2013 10:07:00 PM
Thank you, you're very kind.
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