Valentines

"Icicle" 

From the frosty eaves 
The winter's glass is hanging
Your hand in my hand 



"Eternally"  

The sun has risen 
The white rose is trembling 
You, always, always 



"Aurora"

The heavenly lights 
Bathe her cheeks in red and pink 
Are the stars aligned?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 8:18 AM
I like the way you did this one, congratulations. Have a look at the Questionku form in the form section. I think with your poetic ability you could easily master the form and have fun in the process.
Martin Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:53 PM
Oh it's 456 , I see. Oh, well. Hah. Congrats to you too, Richard
Gasun Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:24 PM
Congratulations my dear Jeremy for your very lovely write and super win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora
Martin Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:46 PM
Awww, thanks :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:06 PM
these are beautiful, Jeremy. Congrats on your awesome win.
Martin Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Likewise on yours, Andrea. Thanks for reading!
Hunter Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Excellent work here for sure, Jeremy...congrats on the big win
Martin Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Thanks, Caleb! You, too
A   Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Jeremy, out of all the fascinating entries.. i fell in love with your entry. Congratulations with your masterpiece.xox~LINDA835h
Martin Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Thank you very much, Linda. That means a lot to me. I really enjoyed writing them
A   Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 10:23 PM
Jeremy, hope this is for my contest... if so... did not mean 2 peek... always~ LINDA
Martin Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 6:16 PM
It is. Happy almost Valentine's Day and thanks for visiting :)
Merryman Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 7:52 PM
Nicely done, Jeremy! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
Martin Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 10:07 PM
Thank you, you're very kind.
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