Tanya Dyal Poet Rhyme

Valentine Shmalentine

Valentine Shmalentine,
 I fell in love and he broke this heart of mine.
Broken promises and sour kisses, 
shattered dreams and wishes.
I gave him my all and I got burned,
Thanks anyway Cupid but my lesson has been learned.

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Teddy Kimathi February 1, 2017 at 8:03 AM So sad..... Congrats Tanya, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-) Tanya Dyal February 6, 2017 at 5:15 PM thank you for the congrats

Newton Ranaweera January 28, 2017 at 8:14 PM Sure, that's witty.

Joseph May January 21, 2017 at 1:46 PM Great write Tanya...best wishes in the contest

Probir Gupta January 21, 2017 at 11:48 AM The kisses that were exchanged, the joy mutually derived , can never sour ... however, relationships do break up ... and the loneliness in valentine is painful ... A very good valentine shmalentine ...

Jan Allison January 21, 2017 at 11:41 AM Awd sad poem for the valentine contest sadly everything in love isn't always having a happy ending:-) hugs Jan xx