valentine on the pier

table by the sea,
music from the crashing waves~
moonlight on her face.


February 9, 2024.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 7:08 PM
Nice and romantic! Congrats!
Emate Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, Kim. I'm honoured.
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 10:00 PM
Oh this is so lovely. Congrats.
Emate Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 9:06 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I'm honoured.
Kitchin Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 12:54 PM
Thompson, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful senryu.
Emate Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 7:00 PM
Thank you, Tania. I'm honoured.
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