S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Haiku

Valentine Haikus

Valentine haikus

East now meets the west
In  Valentine.  Melting hearts
Stay put on high crest

In its familiar
Script, the secret crush attempts
A delicate push

For electric touch.
Like a tremulous tangent
Does  at curves soft spot.


By: S.Jagathsimhan Nair
For: PD’s  contest,  13-01-12

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 31, 2012 at 10:24 PM Congratulations on your great win!! Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown January 31, 2012 at 1:31 PM Congratulations on your win Jag. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley January 31, 2012 at 12:36 PM Congratulations on your win.

Gwendolen Song January 27, 2012 at 5:40 AM A sensuous haiku winner..Hey! Wonderful JOB, Jag. Just awesome!! Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick January 19, 2012 at 1:54 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by my work and leaving an uplifting review..Sara

Ralph Taylor January 16, 2012 at 5:44 PM Congrats, Jag. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph

Bob Quigley January 16, 2012 at 2:57 PM Congratulations on your win Jag. Well done

Carol Sunshine Brown January 16, 2012 at 11:48 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Love Poem" contest Jag. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2012 at 11:00 PM S.J. N,...., CONGRATULATIONS!!! thank you for your wonderful and lovely poem.. Have fun in my next contest. always your one and only~ PD.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 15, 2012 at 7:59 PM congrats Jag on first place win .. awesome luv...

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2012 at 11:47 AM did not see this one in my contest...p.d. ((inform me please)) i love it...xoxo..p.d.

Nette Onclaud January 15, 2012 at 9:36 AM jag, you make my heart sing!... i think i missed this contest or is it a new one.. nonetheless, a winner for me! :) huggs!

Joe Maverick January 14, 2012 at 12:44 PM Enjoyed the "electric touch line" in this write may i call you Jag..? anyway as i said enjoyed this lively piece..)

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2012 at 6:32 PM You have a very unique style, stands out in your haiku! I missed the contest. GEEEEZ.Luv,Andrea

Kash Poet January 13, 2012 at 8:50 AM Ohh..Sorry it seems to be for the current contest....Best wishes.

Kash Poet January 13, 2012 at 8:49 AM Very nice.BUT PD'S contest result is out and you have been placed 2nd I think...check the winners' page:)