Valentine Haikus

Valentine haikus

East now meets the west
In  Valentine.  Melting hearts
Stay put on high crest

In its familiar
Script, the secret crush attempts
A delicate push

For electric touch.
Like a tremulous tangent
Does  at curves soft spot.


By: S.Jagathsimhan Nair
For: PD’s  contest,  13-01-12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/31/2012 10:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win!! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/27/2012 5:40:00 AM
A sensuous haiku winner..Hey! Wonderful JOB, Jag. Just awesome!! Gwendolen
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Date: 1/19/2012 1:54:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by my work and leaving an uplifting review..Sara
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:44:00 PM
Congrats, Jag. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jag. Well done
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Love Poem" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2012 11:00:00 PM
S.J. N,...., CONGRATULATIONS!!! thank you for your wonderful and lovely poem.. Have fun in my next contest. always your one and only~ PD.
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Date: 1/15/2012 7:59:00 PM
congrats Jag on first place win .. awesome luv...
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Date: 1/15/2012 11:47:00 AM
did not see this one in my contest...p.d. ((inform me please)) i love it...xoxo..p.d.
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Date: 1/15/2012 9:36:00 AM
jag, you make my heart sing!... i think i missed this contest or is it a new one.. nonetheless, a winner for me! :) huggs!
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:44:00 PM
Enjoyed the "electric touch line" in this write may i call you Jag..? anyway as i said enjoyed this lively piece..)
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Date: 1/13/2012 6:32:00 PM
You have a very unique style, stands out in your haiku! I missed the contest. GEEEEZ.Luv,Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2012 8:50:00 AM
Ohh..Sorry it seems to be for the current contest....Best wishes.
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Date: 1/13/2012 8:49:00 AM
Very nice.BUT PD'S contest result is out and you have been placed 2nd I think...check the winners' page:)
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