Valentine Haiku Questionku 1
Flower’s heart flutters
Bees pass off the love letter
Bed remains fertile
Alone together
He pulls out his sharpened knife
Names tattoo a tree
Current pulling hard
Water pulling you under
What’s the river’s name?
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