Valentine Haiku Questionku 1

Flower’s heart flutters
Bees pass off the love letter
Bed remains fertile

Alone together
He pulls out his sharpened knife
Names tattoo a tree

Current pulling hard
Water pulling you under
What’s the river’s name?
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February 16, 2013 at 2:01 PM
LUKE, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA
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