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red rose and chocolate are common place, do no justice to someone with your grace, pricey perfumes that are marketed to charm, but smother the odours that in love form, there are designer handbags, scarfs and shoes, many pretty garments that one can choose, but I know these will hold you no appeal, for someone like you it is no big deal, then how shall I profess my love, do say! when stood at your door on Valentine’s day? should I play you a song on violin? or should I dance with you, your love to win? perhaps a candle lit dinner for two? so I can hold your hands and look at you! I am love sick, lost, utterly confused! I know you are not easily seduced, so here is my love posted through your door, filled with kisses!.... ask if need anymore!
1st placement Written 8th January Brian Strand sponsored All yours Feb(9) contest 18 lines with 10 syllables each line

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Date: 2/9/2021 5:48:00 AM
Such a cute Valentines write Krish. My sincere condolences to you, your mom is now your guardian angel! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/9/2021 6:53:00 AM
Thank you my friend! God bless her soul! Yes, I feel her presence closer than ever!
Date: 2/8/2021 9:58:00 PM
It is all in mind. Thoughts bring grief. Busy at work with mind in task at hand is the only way out. Telling from experience try not to think of her. Have seen 6 deaths in front of my eyes including father and mother. When I think of them I still feel sad. So I don't think. Will pray to God to give you mental strength.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/8/2021 11:39:00 PM
Yes Rama, You are right. I shall try and do some work and turn my mind away from her. Good wishes and blessings
Date: 2/8/2021 7:39:00 PM
Good to see you back with your new poems. Are you still in India or gone back to UK. Take care Rama
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/8/2021 8:41:00 PM
Thanks Rama! Just back in UK! Wrote this as a deviation but it will be hard for sometime. It is a slow healing process!

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