Vale of Tears

She walks along an avenue
some call the Vale of Tears.

Her agonies and sorrows brew
in eyes that vail her tears.

She whiles alone, her gaze unmet,
behind a veil of tears.

But can she flee from sadness, yet
with no avail of tears?

In time, the Rue of No Regrets
will countervail her tears.





Vale: valley
Vail: let sink 
Veil: something that conceals
Avail of: use to one’s advantage
Countervail: offset, counteract

Inspired by poems of KC
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 14, 2013 at 8:54 PM
Terry , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
Shetley Avatar
January 17, 2013 at 11:54 PM
I enjoyed this one for its cleverness. I don't think there is anything you could write that I wouldn't like,
Carrillo Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Terry; This is really good. Great rhyme. Terry, you didn't read the whole poem Of A Man Stood. You only read part of it. I was trying to rewrite it. My computer messd up. I just put it back. I still had to write a lot more. Sorry. Maybe tomorrow I'll have part III. Lucilla
Johnson Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 3:23 AM
great use of the words mate ...don
Duncan Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 8:34 PM
I like your rhyme, Terry,,,, thank you for reading my Sweet Ecstasy ;}
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 9:07 AM
I really like the play on words in this one. Thanks for posting this one! and a happy thanksgiving day to you.
Ersal Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 9:15 AM
So nice!
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 3:50 AM
I just stopped by to read this beautiful poem again and add it to my favorites.
Chircop Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 3:45 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem Terry..Its nice for drops of dew to shed from tears... LOVE IT
Horne Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 12:37 PM
wonderful write, my friend - love the clever play on words
Collins Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 8:31 AM
Dear Terry - I hope I'm not being presumptious in appreciating this poem on a highly personal level. If I'm not, thank you, from my boulevard of broken dreams. (glad you didn't use that one). If I am totally self-centered in my little mind, I love it anyway. I think you've hit the mark, my friend. Terry - you make my heart sing! love, Kathy
May Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 8:10 AM
great write Terry ...love all those vails....the rue of no regrets...love it
Gooden Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 7:37 PM
So melancholy but so touching. Enjoyed this Terry. Sherese
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 11:35 AM
A touching poem, well written Terry. - Hope your weekend will be fine. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Palmer Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 5:57 AM
great write Terry
Anderson-Throop Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 1:04 PM
graceful sorrow beautifully stated... I think I have commented on this before...still love it..
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 10:19 AM
I love the word play with the different spellings in alternate lines and the way you tied them altogether. Excellent.
Horsman Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 2:48 PM
this is clever poetry Terry, and flows like tears, it is so good...
Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 1:25 PM
I like this one with the play on words..Sara
Bauer Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 6:08 PM
such a creative piece of writing! i love how beautifully you've woven all the forms of "vale" into your poem. great job!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Really great how you utililzed the words and definitions to convey complex thought, simply devine!
Tsiluma Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 8:25 AM
Positively refreshing! I love it when intelligence shines through poetry...it makes me happy.
Cayton Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 7:24 AM
Nice poetry, enjoyed your expressive poetry this morning Terry. Take good care, and God bless, Cindy
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