Vagabonds Huddle

vagabonds huddle 
round a charcoal burner - -
snow falls

Jack Horne for Carol’s Fire and Ice contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gasun Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 4:41 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Jack! love/hugs, LG
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:56 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Jack xx
Liwayway Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:42 AM
An excellent write!! Congrats my friend Jack on your winning poem. Cheers and Good day always!! Hugs, Maria
A   Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Jack,, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 4:55 PM
I sure liked this even the first time I saw it, Jack. Congrats for your win! Razzmatazz is still exploring my house. She had been hiding under the sofa!
Brown Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Jack. Love, Carol
Collins Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 9:38 AM
a frozen scene indeed.
Maverick Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 2:05 PM
Good one Jack; (good one)
A   Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 11:48 PM
deep..Jack... good luck in the contest..pd
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 12:09 PM
jack, it just occurred to me, I have not heard from you in emails for a few days. Is everything ok??? Sure hope you are all right.
Horsman Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 2:39 PM
this is really good, and says so much, in 13 syllables...
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 3:18 PM
Winner for sure...Great thought went into it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:14 PM
Again, you chose the short route and it WORKS!!! Great job with the challenge.
Anish Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Jack Londonesque scene here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Sivey Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 8:38 PM
Very nicely done for the contest, you should do very well in it with this masterful poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and intriguing piece, Great Work!!
West Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 4:25 PM
Hi Jack, great imagery on this write. Rollo
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 2:00 PM
wow an impressive picture Jack luv .. winning wishes for this wow wonder entry ..happy Sunday too..
Haick Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 1:21 PM
I really like this, Jack..vivid heart touching imagery! Best wishes in the Contest, my friend. Always, Annalise
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 11:14 AM
You have a good Haiku too, Jack. - Well done. - Luck in contest. -Thank you for reading my Haiku. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 10:29 AM
I get a brilliant but sad image with these few words jack xx
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