vagabond hiku

dear vagabond dazzled by wanderlust . . . blind to my tears

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Mike Bayles

Date: 6/8/2025 7:01:00 AM

Very nice.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2025 5:41:00 AM

Congrats, dear one!

Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 6/8/2025 1:20:00 AM

I love it. Congrats.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 6/8/2025 12:03:00 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your win in Brian`s contest with a smoothly flowing write. Wishing you a pleasant day.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 6/7/2025 10:41:00 PM

Nicely penned. Congrats.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/7/2025 9:12:00 PM

Interesting angle here, Andrea. ... Being a former English and ESL teacher, this speaks to me of the novel, 'The Jungle,' where Jurgis finally sets out on his own, ditching his poor family, and joins up with some hobos who hop trains. ~ gw

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/7/2025 10:59:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "vagabond hiku" write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/7/2025 7:04:00 AM

Yes, some wanderers hurt people greatly!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/7/2025 2:53:00 AM

Pretty. Love this. God bless you, love, Gina