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vagabond hiku

dear vagabond dazzled by wanderlust . . . blind to my tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 6/8/2025 7:01:00 AM
Very nice.
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Date: 6/8/2025 5:41:00 AM
Congrats, dear one!
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Date: 6/8/2025 1:20:00 AM
I love it. Congrats.
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Date: 6/8/2025 12:03:00 AM
Congratulations dear poetess on your win in Brian`s contest with a smoothly flowing write. Wishing you a pleasant day.
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Date: 6/7/2025 10:41:00 PM
Nicely penned. Congrats.
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Date: 6/7/2025 9:12:00 PM
Interesting angle here, Andrea. ... Being a former English and ESL teacher, this speaks to me of the novel, 'The Jungle,' where Jurgis finally sets out on his own, ditching his poor family, and joins up with some hobos who hop trains. ~ gw
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Date: 6/7/2025 10:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "vagabond hiku" write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.........
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Date: 6/7/2025 7:04:00 AM
Yes, some wanderers hurt people greatly!
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Date: 6/7/2025 2:53:00 AM
Pretty. Love this. God bless you, love, Gina
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