vagabond hiku

dear vagabond
      dazzled by wanderlust . . .
                           blind to my tears
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Bayles Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 7:01 AM
Very nice.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 5:41 AM
Congrats, dear one!
Asuncion Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 1:20 AM
I love it. Congrats.
Guptar Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 12:03 AM
Congratulations dear poetess on your win in Brian`s contest with a smoothly flowing write. Wishing you a pleasant day.
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 10:41 PM
Nicely penned. Congrats.
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Interesting angle here, Andrea. ... Being a former English and ESL teacher, this speaks to me of the novel, 'The Jungle,' where Jurgis finally sets out on his own, ditching his poor family, and joins up with some hobos who hop trains. ~ gw
Goldsmith Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 10:59 AM
I enjoyed reading your "vagabond hiku" write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.........
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 7:04 AM
Yes, some wanderers hurt people greatly!
Mcintosh Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 2:53 AM
Pretty. Love this. God bless you, love, Gina
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