Vacuum

Not much vacuum to do
Looks very relax and cool
Not suffice dust and hairs
Because the hairy one already not here
Left behind some from my favorite apple in her bathroom
Yet as time goes by she’ll go to different shelter very soon
The house becomes very quiet with ….echo
It’s another challenge and tough page for me
But I rather to be home alone then pay high price for company
end with hidden tears
I’m trying hard to look for part-time or full-time job to spend my sunset days
Trying hard not to bother anyone and gain back my self-esteemed before my final day.
August 13 2012 @ 1:00 pm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 16, 2026 at 7:57 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 1:13 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 8, 2016 at 1:20 PM
AWESOME POEM
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