Vacation

Rafting on river Splash, dip, gurgle, over board Rather be on cruise

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/24/2012 7:19:00 AM

"Rather be on cruise...." -me too ! - well done Rollo! - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West
Date: 11/24/2012 2:27:00 PM

Hi Anne, thank you for coming by and commenting on my write. Rollo

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/23/2012 7:18:00 PM

Ohh, it sounds fun, Rollo. Where else would you be able to drink pure river water but on a raft? And dangerous? Lol. Enjoyed.

Rollo West
Date: 11/24/2012 2:26:00 PM

Hi Toquyen, thank you for stopping by. Rollo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2012 5:32:00 PM

Rollo, awee,,, sorry the ride was not exciting,,, i felt sick imagining the whole falling scenario.. enjoyed reading your haiku, :-) Have yourself a nice night~ PD

Rollo West
Date: 11/23/2012 5:53:00 PM

Hi Linda, thank you for your great review. Rollo

Jacob Cra

Date: 11/23/2012 4:27:00 PM

Short and simple... love it.

Rollo West
Date: 11/23/2012 4:29:00 PM

Hi Jacob, thanks for stopping by. Rollo