Vacation

Rafting on river
Splash, dip, gurgle, over board
Rather be on cruise

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Anne-Lise Andresen

November 24, 2012 at 7:19 AM

"Rather be on cruise...." -me too ! - well done Rollo! - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West

November 24, 2012 at 2:27 PM

Hi Anne, thank you for coming by and commenting on my write. Rollo

Toquyen Harrell

November 23, 2012 at 7:18 PM

Ohh, it sounds fun, Rollo. Where else would you be able to drink pure river water but on a raft? And dangerous? Lol. Enjoyed.

Rollo West

November 24, 2012 at 2:26 PM

Hi Toquyen, thank you for stopping by. Rollo

Poet Destroyer A

November 23, 2012 at 5:32 PM

Rollo, awee,,, sorry the ride was not exciting,,, i felt sick imagining the whole falling scenario.. enjoyed reading your haiku, :-) Have yourself a nice night~ PD

Rollo West

November 23, 2012 at 5:53 PM

Hi Linda, thank you for your great review. Rollo