Vacant

Love that line, emptiness naps upon cobwebs! You are quite the descriptive writer! andrea

A very imaginative description to illustrate "Vacant" and very well written cinquain. Interesting read. Thanks for sharing, Caroline.

Very eloquent...expresses poignant emotion..Take good care John... Always, Farah

I have found cinquain's are hard to express real emotion....but you nailed it!! "emptiness naps upon cobwebs"....brilliant!! Wow! ....Love, Carrie ...ps..soupmail reply!

John this is excellent - wonderful penmanship as always - I have missed reading your poetry a lot - it is always in a class all its own - Glad and honored to read your writing again, God Bless, mj

John, this write tore at my heartstrings.As always a ~~~Magnificent piece~~~. It is so wonderful to see a post from you. Hope there are more coming. Thank you for sharing and please stick around for a while. Love, Carol

John, you describe a hollowness that seems so prevalent in these times. We seek to fill the void with eartly things, to no avail. Well written cinquain. Hugs, Donna

Very thought-provoking cinquain, John. It's bad enough when "places" are vacant, but many times people's hearts, minds and souls have the type of vacancy you describe. I have felt this way myself at times. Compelling write! Love, Carolyn