Vacancy

In the pitch of midnight black a shining
The stitch of an illusory lining
Weary traveler opines, where is my place?
The eyes go towards well-lit grace

Sheer magnitude of emptiness and yet
Rooms-a-plenty past midnight's rest
Lost, the traveler mused, where is my place?
The eyes go towards well-lit grace

But shines a little longer this shining
Ever so present in the illusory lining
Robust a light for all to see this
Shining bright, refulgent bliss

In that dark of midnight black scarred lie
A star, like a pearl in the sky
The traveler sings, there, that is my place
Found vacancy in well-lit grace

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By: Tim B on 04/18/2012
Written for: Russell Sivey's contest "Midnight Pearl"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Smith Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 7:43 AM
Beautifully written verses.
Kendrick Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 3:43 PM
Enjoyed reading this contest entry...Reads like an winner to me..Interesting the progression of the work..Very creative..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I liked your humor ad reasoning about the use of the word asinine...Sara
Eastman Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 1:35 PM
Well done for the contest and a joy to read.
Onclaud Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 11:55 AM
this charms me no end, tim... what a graceful train of images unconventionally conceived.. best wishes and huggs! :)
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 8:41 AM
The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Tim. Love, Carol
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April 18, 2012 at 9:53 PM
This is a truly awesome poem.Great write my friend.
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