William Kelii Kekaula Poet Verse

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Vaasokht

Vaasokht 

Values warp love intrigue
Vexed liaison unfair
Vetted assails exacts
Volatile edged divorce
Vaasokht has six rhymed lines
Very old forms have eight
Views last two as unrhymed

*Syllabics checked via howmanysyllables

2020 October 28
*1st Place*
Pleiades 3
~~Joseph May

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Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2020 at 8:17 PM gosh I never heard of this before, but you were very ambitious using V words. WELL DONE. Congrats on a wonderful win. William Kelii Kekaula October 30, 2020 at 8:31 PM I raced against the clock on this one, Andrea, being the 35th entry, and now Tania's, 'Spooky', ~phew! Thanks, also for the accolade, Aloha!

Alexis Y. October 28, 2020 at 7:25 PM Hi William, I never heard of the form. Thank for bringing to my attention in this well written write. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis William Kelii Kekaula October 28, 2020 at 9:41 PM Hello Alexis, glad for my intro as your muse awaits, I am made humble, have a great tomorrow, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues October 28, 2020 at 7:24 PM A form I haven’t heard of! Congrats, William! William Kelii Kekaula October 28, 2020 at 9:38 PM Glad noting my intro and accolade, Kim, Aloha!

Joseph May October 28, 2020 at 4:33 PM Very nicely penned William, Congrats on your win.. William Kelii Kekaula October 28, 2020 at 9:23 PM Thank you, Joseph, for this wondrous opportunity, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman October 28, 2020 at 10:52 AM Congratulations on your first place win, William. Your poetic form is vividly painted through your remarkable imagery. All the best! Aloha oe! William Kelii Kekaula October 28, 2020 at 12:29 PM I am grateful for your considerations, Sam, and your beefed up vocabulary, mahalo nui loa!