Vaasokht

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Vaasokht Values warp love intrigue Vexed liaison unfair Vetted assails exacts Volatile edged divorce Vaasokht has six rhymed lines Very old forms have eight Views last two as unrhymed *Syllabics checked via howmanysyllables 2020 October 28 *1st Place* Pleiades 3 ~~Joseph May

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2020 8:17:00 PM

gosh I never heard of this before, but you were very ambitious using V words. WELL DONE. Congrats on a wonderful win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/30/2020 8:31:00 PM

I raced against the clock on this one, Andrea, being the 35th entry, and now Tania's, 'Spooky', ~phew! Thanks, also for the accolade, Aloha!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/28/2020 7:25:00 PM

Hi William, I never heard of the form. Thank for bringing to my attention in this well written write. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/28/2020 9:41:00 PM

Hello Alexis, glad for my intro as your muse awaits, I am made humble, have a great tomorrow, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/28/2020 7:24:00 PM

A form I haven’t heard of! Congrats, William!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/28/2020 9:38:00 PM

Glad noting my intro and accolade, Kim, Aloha!

Joseph May

Date: 10/28/2020 4:33:00 PM

Very nicely penned William, Congrats on your win..

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/28/2020 9:23:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph, for this wondrous opportunity, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/28/2020 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win, William. Your poetic form is vividly painted through your remarkable imagery. All the best! Aloha oe!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/28/2020 12:29:00 PM

I am grateful for your considerations, Sam, and your beefed up vocabulary, mahalo nui loa!