Utterly Alone

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Written: October 17, 2023 Bite Size Poem No.74 for Line Gauthier Contest __________________________________________ silent solitude flame-edged leaf dances alone~ nature's fiery grace

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Deb M

Date: 10/19/2023 8:04:00 AM

Simple and ever so beautiful Lasaad! Debx

Paige Hind

Date: 10/17/2023 5:42:00 PM

A beautiful haiku! I loved the fiery grace part.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/17/2023 12:48:00 PM

WOW!!! What a wonderful Haiku write/pretty picture. Have a blessed/great day.............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2023 12:47:00 PM

- Excellent written, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 10/17/2023 11:41:00 AM

Silent solitude, that first line, the alliterations and emotions conveyed is so very poignant and soul stirring, i felt that and also how you’ve written “ flame-edged leaf dances alone” what a unique and artistic line that is! One i havent read anywhere before “flame edged leaf” i love that! “Natures fiery grace” love that! So much said and a very evocative haiku flowing with descriptive diction! One of my fave haiku from you!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/17/2023 10:57:00 AM

The imagery is simply gorgeous Sotto Poet:-) hugs jan xx