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Utterly Alone

Written: October 17, 2023
Bite Size Poem No.74 for Line Gauthier Contest
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silent solitude
flame-edged leaf dances alone~
nature's fiery grace

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Deb M Date: 10/19/2023 8:04:00 AM Simple and ever so beautiful Lasaad! Debx Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 10/17/2023 5:42:00 PM A beautiful haiku! I loved the fiery grace part. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/17/2023 12:48:00 PM WOW!!! What a wonderful Haiku write/pretty picture. Have a blessed/great day............. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/17/2023 12:47:00 PM - Excellent written, Las :) - hugs Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 10/17/2023 11:41:00 AM Silent solitude, that first line, the alliterations and emotions conveyed is so very poignant and soul stirring, i felt that and also how you’ve written “ flame-edged leaf dances alone” what a unique and artistic line that is! One i havent read anywhere before “flame edged leaf” i love that! “Natures fiery grace” love that! So much said and a very evocative haiku flowing with descriptive diction! One of my fave haiku from you! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/17/2023 10:57:00 AM The imagery is simply gorgeous Sotto Poet:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply