Utterly Alone

Written: October 17, 2023
Bite Size Poem No.74 for Line Gauthier Contest
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silent solitude
flame-edged leaf dances alone~
nature's fiery grace

analogybeautynaturehaiku

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Deb M

October 19, 2023 at 8:04 AM

Simple and ever so beautiful Lasaad! Debx

Paige Hind

October 17, 2023 at 5:42 PM

A beautiful haiku! I loved the fiery grace part.

Paula Goldsmith

October 17, 2023 at 12:48 PM

WOW!!! What a wonderful Haiku write/pretty picture. Have a blessed/great day.............

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 17, 2023 at 12:47 PM

- Excellent written, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress

October 17, 2023 at 11:41 AM

Silent solitude, that first line, the alliterations and emotions conveyed is so very poignant and soul stirring, i felt that and also how you’ve written “ flame-edged leaf dances alone” what a unique and artistic line that is! One i havent read anywhere before “flame edged leaf” i love that! “Natures fiery grace” love that! So much said and a very evocative haiku flowing with descriptive diction! One of my fave haiku from you!