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Utopia

go away, far faraway find a land as i say no matter the sun,no matter the rain no matter the soil or barren land matters most the humble occupants the flight of birds, the roar of beasts the lush green,tall trees, meadow all alike differ what the souls that reside go away ,far faraway find me a place where kindness mingle in blood so deep hatred makes a man weak where 'divide on hide' rides the doom's slide where jealousy is sin selfish devil's kin where down in deep hole the corrupt souls are thrown where animosity is alien sadness is gone, love born where no black,brown or white better make me colour-blind religions mingle in peace no racism, hatred no more! no gun in my soldier's hand no need of bloodspat be all friends, holding each other's hand a place we can sit in peace no terror, no gruesome act no evil's pact where you and me are 'we' humanity in all its beauty love, wisdom, work our duty a place like Eden's twin down from heaven, round the sun to spin but fool of me! to ask for an impossible deed such treasure land not found, but formed together 'we' shall create that land cleanse our soul of all filth open our mind to optimism once ourselves purged then tell them all no more racism, no more narrow nationalism no more terror in religion's name stern! tell all what we want no more hatred and war stop fussing on colors few lets see a world full of shades new such mighty task,need soul and sweat our love, wisdom, optimism,courage utopia living! no more a fantasy so shall we all,create that land where our future'll be shining bright proud and praising the hard work of our present.

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Date: 5/22/2017 11:31:00 AM
You masterfully went full circle, from utopia to 'our present' in this incredible poem. And your message is filled with so much heart and truth we fully embrace it and ride on its wave. I wish it were selected as poem of the day. A 7:) Amitiés
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/23/2017 12:22:00 PM
That is so kind of you to say Nitika but I am just an ordinary poet who appreciates your awesome piece that speaks for itself. Keep on writing, you are enlightening us all!
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Nitika Singh
Date: 5/22/2017 1:36:00 PM
Thank you very much for such a wonderful review Anne-Marie :) Glad to know that a brilliant poet liked it.Made my day!

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