Utopia

Even
When Rivers flow with gold
And land is
Sewn with Coal
Nothing will have changed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 7, 2010 at 10:30 AM
Hi again, i forgot to thank you for your comment. When are you going to post a new one. I await for something awesome to read from you again. always,..Sidney LeeAnn
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June 3, 2010 at 7:46 PM
Hello poet Chris, I am working on a poem. For a contest, reporting live at the soup. I was wondering if I could use you on my report. it is a humorus poem. About poet and poetrycrime. Very harmless. It is almost like my poetry police. where I use poets from the soup. You will enjoy my poem. If you do not wish for me to mention you could i use a small note on your awesome but short poems. It is no slam, only fun news. Thanks I will soup mail you a small portion of it later,..Sidney LeeAnn
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May 31, 2010 at 1:30 PM
A strong piece of art. I could see several different landscapes from the meanings I could derive from these five lines. awesome work.
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May 17, 2010 at 9:00 AM
Refreshing a breath of paradise, to all incoming changes,,Irma
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May 11, 2010 at 9:16 PM
Thank you Vomiticus!
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May 10, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Thank you very much.
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May 10, 2010 at 9:16 PM
what a wonderful small fun passage on the Meaning of Utopia. A very strong word to describe such a wonder in land, enjoyed,..p.d.
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