Utopia

Even
When Rivers flow with gold
And land is
Sewn with Coal
Nothing will have changed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/7/2010 10:30:00 AM
Hi again, i forgot to thank you for your comment. When are you going to post a new one. I await for something awesome to read from you again. always,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/3/2010 7:46:00 PM
Hello poet Chris, I am working on a poem. For a contest, reporting live at the soup. I was wondering if I could use you on my report. it is a humorus poem. About poet and poetrycrime. Very harmless. It is almost like my poetry police. where I use poets from the soup. You will enjoy my poem. If you do not wish for me to mention you could i use a small note on your awesome but short poems. It is no slam, only fun news. Thanks I will soup mail you a small portion of it later,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 5/31/2010 1:30:00 PM
A strong piece of art. I could see several different landscapes from the meanings I could derive from these five lines. awesome work.
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Date: 5/17/2010 9:00:00 AM
Refreshing a breath of paradise, to all incoming changes,,Irma
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Date: 5/11/2010 9:16:00 PM
Thank you Vomiticus!
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Date: 5/10/2010 9:23:00 PM
Thank you very much.
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Date: 5/10/2010 9:16:00 PM
what a wonderful small fun passage on the Meaning of Utopia. A very strong word to describe such a wonder in land, enjoyed,..p.d.
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