Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Verse

Utopia

Under dim sky of doubt
umpteen times I’ve wondered,
unkind world would ever
usher in empathy. 
Utopian thought this,
unless the base instincts
usurp us forever.

April 30, 2021
Syllable count : 6 per line (howmanysyllables.com)
Contest : Pleiades U
Sponsor : Kim Merryman

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Sara Kendrick May 18, 2021 at 4:56 AM I really like the flow of this one. No, without Jesus coming back to usher in His Kingdom there will be no utopia. Congrats on this winner. Sara

Kim Merryman May 4, 2021 at 7:33 PM Nicely written, Subimal! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Jan Allison May 3, 2021 at 3:46 PM Beautifully penned Subimal, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx