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Utopia

Under dim sky of doubt umpteen times I’ve wondered, unkind world would ever usher in empathy. Utopian thought this, unless the base instincts usurp us forever. April 30, 2021 Syllable count : 6 per line (howmanysyllables.com) Contest : Pleiades U Sponsor : Kim Merryman

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Date: 5/18/2021 4:56:00 AM
I really like the flow of this one. No, without Jesus coming back to usher in His Kingdom there will be no utopia. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Date: 5/4/2021 7:33:00 PM
Nicely written, Subimal! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/3/2021 3:46:00 PM
Beautifully penned Subimal, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/3/2021 11:14:00 AM
Dear Subimal, this is an excellent Pleiades. Congratulations on your fine win! Carol Louise
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