Used Up

Felt accused, so abused
Mistreated life, depleted
Violent line defined
Hystericaly speaking,
Can't start reliving
These observations eternal
Meaning the believing
Stops breathing heathen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 23, 2011 at 11:03 AM
I'm really loosed up with it, the desolate state of the narrator.
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