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My eyes are sewed shut, my mouth is secured my ears are open the ocean waves sounds pure. I follow the sound with my hands out since i can't see , I can hear the clouds going by, wind blowing through the trees, I don't want to hear these things, so i cover my ears so i wont hear a thing. Now i cant see, hear, or speak i want to find the ocean my own way, But wait i can still smell the mist of the ocean, I picked up 2 rocks and put them in my nostrils. I have nothing to help me now i can't speak, hear, smell or see. While i'm walking through the beach, I fainted because i couldn't breathe, i shouldn't of been afraid i should have let my sense help me find the way.

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Date: 3/19/2016 12:08:00 AM
Well done Davontay... SKAT
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